This is a response to a poem by Dilpreet Randhawa (a freshman) on his blog, reachingforglory.blogspot.com. I don't know; it's just a free form poem that I thought might sound kind of neat.
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Adversity
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Weak outer shell
Ruptured
Inner strength
Revealed
Character, nature
Hardened or broken
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Molding diamonds
Releasing a flood of greater potency
Revealing the best or the worst
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Pressure
Hey Jacob...
ReplyDeleteI couldn't find the poem on Dilpreet's blog that you responded to, but I liked your poem. I actually wouldn't really connect it to pressure if you hadn't named it pressure, but since you did I see how under pressure those things could happen. Nice originality too.
Yeah, it might be in the archives.
ReplyDeleteJacob that was a very cool form, the flow and pattern of the poem helped me to be able to see what you were talking about and really made an impact on your writing. Nice job!
ReplyDeleteThe format that this entry was in had a nice flow to it that really helped get your point across. Great job!
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